Film & TV Language: Mise-en-scene video feedback and learner response

WWW (What Went Well):

•The lighting was accurate, with a good balance of low-key and hard lighting.

•The angle and background were well-chosen, enhancing the overall visual appeal.

•The editing and cinematography were strong, contributing to the performance’s impact.

EBI (Even Better If):

•Include more tears for the character to enhance the emotional intensity of the scene.

Student Feedback:

WWW:

•The lighting and background were both accurately aligned with the original scene.

•The editing was effective, complementing the overall visual composition.

EBI:

•More tears could be added to emphasise the emotional weight of the performance.

Reflection:

In future projects, I will focus on ensuring my character’s facial expressions are more pronounced, accurately reflecting the emotional depth of the original scene.

Self-Assessment:

Based on the feedback from my teacher and peers, I agree that my video featured good editing and lighting, closely mimicking the original scene. However, adding more visible tears from the actor would enhance the emotional realism and better mirror the original character. Through this project, I’ve come to understand the importance of mise-en-scène in visual storytelling. Mise-en-scène refers to the arrangement of everything on screen—setting, costume, lighting, and actor placement—which is critical in conveying mood, themes, and character development. Filmmakers use these elements to guide the audience’s interpretation of the story, with intentional choices in mise-en-scène enhancing the narrative without relying on dialogue.